Seems like the evening found me well
And stuck in rhyme I've been
So to the forums online, tell
Some crit in prose, be seen ...
I was on roll and going strong
When this here chap propose
A challenge, thought I, just how long
How long this river flows ...
So here's reply to what he ask
Just like that, out the blue
An image post, a crit at task
The words did just ensue...
Yet there are those that maybe missed
The intent of the muse
So set them straight, I did insist
Some thoughts for them, peruse.
- ▼ Jul 2008 (10)