Some Online Crit, In prose we Git

Seems like the evening found me well
And stuck in rhyme I've been
So to the forums online, tell
Some crit in prose, be seen ...

I was on roll and going strong
When this here chap propose
A challenge, thought I, just how long
How long this river flows ...

So here's reply to what he ask
Just like that, out the blue
An image post, a crit at task
The words did just ensue...

http://forums.dpreview.com/forums/read.asp?forum=1034&message=28780809

Yet there are those that maybe missed
The intent of the muse
So set them straight, I did insist
Some thoughts for them, peruse.

http://forums.dpreview.com/forums/read.asp?forum=1034&message=28785969

Adieu.